Luna Lola: The Moon Wolf

The writer does have potential but is in need serious need of a good editor and proofreader. So many places I could see ways to improve. From the typos such as cane for came or thogudbsjis for thought (there were many more) to the needing the avoid repeated usage and other ways to describe that you learn in many writing classes - HS, that is. Although you can learn outside of that. As well as how quick some of the bonding and fighting was, like a Wattpad fic just trying to get any words out. Some of the descriptions of actions didn't suit some of the characters or could have been explained more or described in other ways. The biggest issue, however, was the changing names halfway through. It confused me and I even had to read back to check when a Chelsea had been introduced when it was Lyla instead. Even the male protagonist didn't escape towards the end - being called Alexander insteadof Adrian. This plot and story has so much potential and it's sad to see it fail some of that because the author has no one on their side to help.

The story line is great. However there is a reason why publishers get paid big bucks. -- PROOF READ THE STORY PRIOR TO PUBLISHING. There are spelling mistakes throughout the text -- ones that would have been caught by a basic spell checker. And please keep track of which charaters are which in the story and do not randomly add names that are not part of the story. I will enjoy reading the series again -- after I retype it, so I can correct the errors and not be jarred by the inaccruacies.

I started to read it then was unable to finish it. I had to laugh at some of the reviews as they were true & funny. After reading many of them, I decided not to finish reading a book w/so many flaws/mistakes. But as I kept reading the reviews, I changed my mind. I will read it completely b/c, if nothing else, the reviews are worth it.....lol. Seriously, anyone lucky enough to have work published, should have enough pride in their work, to make sure theirself that the spelling(at least)is ok.